Bonjour, étant donné qu je ne suis pas très forte en anglais voir pas du tout, j'aimerai que quelqu'un me corrige ma rédaction en anglais. Merci d'avance..
At the moment, I look for a collocation wiht someone that's why I write you. Indeed I have find your advertisement and I will be interested in your offer.
First I introduce myself so you can better choose if you want or not to life together. Me name is ****, I'm from France and I come in London for six months. I think that I can share a flat because I'm someone who is serious, pleasant, very organized. Futhermore I'm open-minded. I think that a roomshare can to adapt more quickly daily. Then we can share moment such as the lunch.
If I come in London it's because I want to know a new experience. But also I want to improve the language so as to I will enrich my knowledge because English is a important language. I'm single so the collocation avoids the solitude. I have choose to use the way of living because of it's really economic therefore I can save.
The price is 200$ per month not includind bill. It's that ? But how must does the bills approximately cost ? I find the flat very nice and enough big. Moreover there is a balcony with a great view. I have still matter. Can we invite people in the flat ? Can we have animals ?
the bills approximately ? I find the flat very nice and enough big. Moreover there is a balcony with a great view. I have still matter. Can we invite people in the flat ? Can we have animals ? Are the food share ?
I hope that you answer quickly and positively.
Voilà le texte ..
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