Aide pour traduire un petit texte simple

Bonjour , donc pour demain , je dois faire un texte en projetant mon jour id?al ? New-York du matin au soir .
Donc bien moi , je l'ai d?ja fais en fran?ais mais j'aimerais avoir de l'aide pour me le traduire en anglais , s'il vous plait ..
Merci d'avance =)


Voici le texte :


Pour commencer la journ?e, j?aimerais d?couvrir la ville, son architecture et ses symboles. Comme la Statue de la Libert?, l? Empire State Bulding .. etc.
Je voudrais aussi profiter de cette multitude raciale et culturelle, visiter les mus?es, les grattes ciel et tous les autres symboles .
Le midi, je me baladerais ? Chinatown, pour d?guster des plats originaires du pays .
J?aimerais aller en suite boire un bon caf? dans le quartier italien, puis faire du shopping dans les quartiers les plus chics.
En fin d?apr?s-midi, j?aimerais me rendre au Central Park afin de me relaxer un peu.
Au soir , dans cette ville qui ne dort jamais ? Never Sleeps ? J? aimerais aller au th??tre , au cin?ma et participer ? une soir?e ? th?me ? Jazz , Rock n roll ?
Pour finir la journ?e , et pouvoir passer une bonne nuit , j?aimerais rencontrer des stars am?ricaines comme Mary-Kate and Ashley Olsen , Gwen Stefani , Justin Timberlake ,,
J? aimerais revoir Mariah-Carey , cette talentueuse chanteuse , que j?avais eu la chance de voir , lors de mes vacances en Tunisie , en 2005 .




Merci d'avance =)

Bonjour,

Personne ici ne fera ton travail ? ta place.

A te lire.

Conseils : Ne fais pas de phrases trop longues. Deux propositions suffisent amplement. Essaye de "penser" en anglais. Mets quelques mots, qui seront un mini plan, sur une feuille de papier, puis r?dige en anglais.

MOTS DE LIAISON :
to begin with = pour commencer
then = puis
besides/moreover = de plus
thus = ainsi
therefore = en cons?quence
finally = enfin
in short = bref,..
all things considered = tout compte fait
to recap = en r?sum?
to conclude / in conclusion = pour conclure

I'd say that = je dirais que
it seems to me that = il me semble que
as for = quant ?
according to = d'apr?s (quelqu'un d'autre que moi)
to my mind = ? mon avis
how can I put it = comment dire...
mind you (familier) = remarquez...
what I mean is that = ce que je veux dire, c'est que
the point is (that) = le fait est que
in other words = autrement dit
that is to say = c'est-?-dire

actually = en r?alit?, en fait
in fact = en fait
in a way = en un sens
to a certain extent = dans une certaine mesure
anyway = en tous cas
as a rule = en r?gle g?n?rale
generally speaking = en g?n?ral
on the whole = dans l'ensemble

on the one hand = d'une part / d'un c?t?
on the other hand = d'autre part / d'un autre c?t?
still = quand m?me / tout de m?me
yet = pourtant
however = cependant
on the contrary = au contraire
in spite of = en d?pit de / malgr?

by the way = au fait...
that reminds me = ?a me fait penser......



first / firstly = d'abord
next / after that = apr?s cel?
Secondly =en second lieu
also / too / as well = aussi/?galement
neither...nor = ni...ni
indeed = en effet
in fact/ as a matter of fact/actually = en fait
of course/ naturally/ (quite) obviously = bien s?r/ ?videmment
OPPOSITION :
but = mais
nevertheless. however = cependant, toutefois
yet = pourtant
on the contrary = au contraire
on the other hand = en revanche
On the one hand...on the other hand = d'une part...d'autre part
(al)though = bien que
in spite of/ despite = malgr?/ en d?pit de
whereas/ while = alors que/ tandis que
CONDITION:
If/ provided/providing (that) = si/ ? condition que
supposing = ? supposer que
in case = au cas o?
even if = m?me si
except if/ unless = ? moins que
TIME:
When = quand/lorsque
while = pendant que
whenever = chaque fois que
before = avant que
after = apr?s que
since = depuis que
till. until = jusqu'? ce que
as soon as = d?s que
as long as = tant que
meanwhile/ in the meantime = en attendant/ entretemps
PURPOSE : (but)
(in order) to/ so as to = afin de
with a view to = dans l'intention de
in order that/ so that = afin que/ de sorte que
CAUSE :
because = parce que
as = comme
since = puisque
for = car
because of/ owing to/ due to = ? cause de/ en raison de
thanks to = gr?ce ?
what... for = pourquoi/ dans quel but ?
CONSEQUENCE:
so/ thus = donc/ ainsi
therefore/ accordingly/ consequently = par cons?quent
hence = d'o?
thereby/ as a result (of which) = de ce fait
so/such...that = si/ tellement que
so that = de telle sorte que
CONCLUSION:
in short/ in brief/ in a word/ to sum up = en un mot/ en r?sum?
eventually = ? la fin
last (of all)/ lastly/ in the end/ finally = enfin/ en dernier lieu
in conclusion/ to conclude = en conclusion

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To start the day, I would like to discover the city, its architecture and its symbols. Like the Statue of Freedom, the Empire State Building etc. I am also very fond off the racial and cultural multitude, the museums, the big buildings as well as the other symbols. At midday, a walk in Chinatown wile tasting the typical country dishes would be great. Afterwards I would like to go drinking a good coffee at the Italian quarter, followed by shopping at the most exquisite places.
At the end of the afternoon, I would like to visit the Central Park in order to relax a bit. At the evening, in the city that ?Never Sleeps ? a visit to the theatre, the cinema and a ?Jazz, Rock N roll ? evening must be on the program.
The encounter off American stars like Mary-Kate and Ashley Olsen, Gwen Stefani, Justin Timberlake, ? at the end of the day is welcome and helps for a good night sleep.
I would really like to see Mariah-Carey again, that talented singer, that I was lucky to meet, during my holiday in Tunisia, back in 2005.

Hello!

Here are a few suggestions :

To start the day, I would like to discover the city, its architecture and its symbols. Like the Statue of <Freedom> LIBERTY, the Empire State Building etc (ou : and so on...). I am also very fond of<f> the racial and cultural multitude, the museums, the big buildings as well as the other symbols. At midday, a walk in Chinatown wHile tasting the typical country dishes would be great. Afterwards I would like to go <drinking> AND HAVE a good coffee at the Italian quarter, followed by shopping at the most exquisite places.
At the end of the afternoon, I would like to visit <the> Central Park in order to relax a bit. <At> IN the evening, in the city that ?Never Sleeps ? a visit to the theatre, the cinema and a ?Jazz, Rock N roll ? evening <must> SHOULD be on the program.
The encounter of<f> American stars like Mary-Kate and Ashley Olsen, Gwen Stefani, Justin Timberlake, ? at the end of the day is (ne change pas de temps en cours de route) welcome and helps (idem) for a good night sleep.
I would really like to see Mariah-Carey again, that talented singer, that I was lucky to meet, during my holiday in Tunisia, back in 2005.

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merci de votre part mais j'ai du le faire moi meme =(
C'?tait pour lundi ,,
Merci en tout cas , j'ai mis normalment comme vous =)
a bientot

C'est dommage. J'esp?re que ?a aura bien march?.
Essaie de mettre tes messages sur le forum, plut?t que de m'envoyer des messages personnels. (Je ne pense pas toujours ? aller voir s'il y en a !)

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