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Bonjour , donc pour demain , je dois faire un texte en projetant mon jour id?al ? New-York du matin au soir .
Donc bien moi , je l'ai d?ja fais en fran?ais mais j'aimerais avoir de l'aide pour me le traduire en anglais , s'il vous plait .. Merci d'avance =) Voici le texte : Pour commencer la journ?e, j?aimerais d?couvrir la ville, son architecture et ses symboles. Comme la Statue de la Libert?, l? Empire State Bulding .. etc. Je voudrais aussi profiter de cette multitude raciale et culturelle, visiter les mus?es, les grattes ciel et tous les autres symboles . Le midi, je me baladerais ? Chinatown, pour d?guster des plats originaires du pays . J?aimerais aller en suite boire un bon caf? dans le quartier italien, puis faire du shopping dans les quartiers les plus chics. En fin d?apr?s-midi, j?aimerais me rendre au Central Park afin de me relaxer un peu. Au soir , dans cette ville qui ne dort jamais ? Never Sleeps ? J? aimerais aller au th??tre , au cin?ma et participer ? une soir?e ? th?me ? Jazz , Rock n roll ? Pour finir la journ?e , et pouvoir passer une bonne nuit , j?aimerais rencontrer des stars am?ricaines comme Mary-Kate and Ashley Olsen , Gwen Stefani , Justin Timberlake ,, J? aimerais revoir Mariah-Carey , cette talentueuse chanteuse , que j?avais eu la chance de voir , lors de mes vacances en Tunisie , en 2005 . Merci d'avance =)
Conseils : Ne fais pas de phrases trop longues. Deux propositions suffisent amplement. Essaye de "penser" en anglais. Mets quelques mots, qui seront un mini plan, sur une feuille de papier, puis r?dige en anglais.
MOTS DE LIAISON : to begin with = pour commencer then = puis besides/moreover = de plus thus = ainsi therefore = en cons?quence finally = enfin in short = bref,.. all things considered = tout compte fait to recap = en r?sum? to conclude / in conclusion = pour conclure I'd say that = je dirais que it seems to me that = il me semble que as for = quant ? according to = d'apr?s (quelqu'un d'autre que moi) to my mind = ? mon avis how can I put it = comment dire... mind you (familier) = remarquez... what I mean is that = ce que je veux dire, c'est que the point is (that) = le fait est que in other words = autrement dit that is to say = c'est-?-dire actually = en r?alit?, en fait in fact = en fait in a way = en un sens to a certain extent = dans une certaine mesure anyway = en tous cas as a rule = en r?gle g?n?rale generally speaking = en g?n?ral on the whole = dans l'ensemble on the one hand = d'une part / d'un c?t? on the other hand = d'autre part / d'un autre c?t? still = quand m?me / tout de m?me yet = pourtant however = cependant on the contrary = au contraire in spite of = en d?pit de / malgr? by the way = au fait... that reminds me = ?a me fait penser...... first / firstly = d'abord next / after that = apr?s cel? Secondly =en second lieu also / too / as well = aussi/?galement neither...nor = ni...ni indeed = en effet in fact/ as a matter of fact/actually = en fait of course/ naturally/ (quite) obviously = bien s?r/ ?videmment OPPOSITION : but = mais nevertheless. however = cependant, toutefois yet = pourtant on the contrary = au contraire on the other hand = en revanche On the one hand...on the other hand = d'une part...d'autre part (al)though = bien que in spite of/ despite = malgr?/ en d?pit de whereas/ while = alors que/ tandis que CONDITION: If/ provided/providing (that) = si/ ? condition que supposing = ? supposer que in case = au cas o? even if = m?me si except if/ unless = ? moins que TIME: When = quand/lorsque while = pendant que whenever = chaque fois que before = avant que after = apr?s que since = depuis que till. until = jusqu'? ce que as soon as = d?s que as long as = tant que meanwhile/ in the meantime = en attendant/ entretemps PURPOSE : (but) (in order) to/ so as to = afin de with a view to = dans l'intention de in order that/ so that = afin que/ de sorte que CAUSE : because = parce que as = comme since = puisque for = car because of/ owing to/ due to = ? cause de/ en raison de thanks to = gr?ce ? what... for = pourquoi/ dans quel but ? CONSEQUENCE: so/ thus = donc/ ainsi therefore/ accordingly/ consequently = par cons?quent hence = d'o? thereby/ as a result (of which) = de ce fait so/such...that = si/ tellement que so that = de telle sorte que CONCLUSION: in short/ in brief/ in a word/ to sum up = en un mot/ en r?sum? eventually = ? la fin last (of all)/ lastly/ in the end/ finally = enfin/ en dernier lieu in conclusion/ to conclude = en conclusion @+ :)
To start the day, I would like to discover the city, its architecture and its symbols. Like the Statue of Freedom, the Empire State Building etc. I am also very fond off the racial and cultural multitude, the museums, the big buildings as well as the other symbols. At midday, a walk in Chinatown wile tasting the typical country dishes would be great. Afterwards I would like to go drinking a good coffee at the Italian quarter, followed by shopping at the most exquisite places.
At the end of the afternoon, I would like to visit the Central Park in order to relax a bit. At the evening, in the city that ?Never Sleeps ? a visit to the theatre, the cinema and a ?Jazz, Rock N roll ? evening must be on the program. The encounter off American stars like Mary-Kate and Ashley Olsen, Gwen Stefani, Justin Timberlake, ? at the end of the day is welcome and helps for a good night sleep. I would really like to see Mariah-Carey again, that talented singer, that I was lucky to meet, during my holiday in Tunisia, back in 2005.
Hello!
Here are a few suggestions : To start the day, I would like to discover the city, its architecture and its symbols. Like the Statue of <Freedom> LIBERTY, the Empire State Building etc (ou : and so on...). I am also very fond of<f> the racial and cultural multitude, the museums, the big buildings as well as the other symbols. At midday, a walk in Chinatown wHile tasting the typical country dishes would be great. Afterwards I would like to go <drinking> AND HAVE a good coffee at the Italian quarter, followed by shopping at the most exquisite places. At the end of the afternoon, I would like to visit <the> Central Park in order to relax a bit. <At> IN the evening, in the city that ?Never Sleeps ? a visit to the theatre, the cinema and a ?Jazz, Rock N roll ? evening <must> SHOULD be on the program. The encounter of<f> American stars like Mary-Kate and Ashley Olsen, Gwen Stefani, Justin Timberlake, ? at the end of the day is (ne change pas de temps en cours de route) welcome and helps (idem) for a good night sleep. I would really like to see Mariah-Carey again, that talented singer, that I was lucky to meet, during my holiday in Tunisia, back in 2005. @+ :)
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Les ateliers de Papi Jacques | Les cours | |
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Mathématiques, cours niveau terminale.
Histoire, cours niveau terminale. Citations de philosophie. Sciences de la vie et de la terre, des sujets de bac 1999. Chimie, des sujets de bac 2000. |