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Bonjour , voici une partie de lettre de motivation que je dois restituer d'ici le 8 novembre. Une petite correction me serait de toute aide ...
" I am currently working as clerk of work at BAULAND TP ( FRANCE ) from 10 years, after obtained a Master degree at Nantes University in public and marine works , it has always been my intention to work on marine sites . I took knowledge of dredging , blasting , pontoons , bathymetry … But ,what's more important , i learnt how to manage subordinates , and to monitor progress and cost of various projects , always keeping warning eyes on materials , safety , quality and satisfaction of the client . This job gave me self confidence , precious knowledges on marine works , and an international contact network , permitting me to practize currently English . Too , This work experience has familiarised me with many of the challenges involved in modern public relations , Today i feel ready to diversify my view field , joining an international well reputated building company bazed in Oman . I would particularly enjoy the chance to work for an oil and gaz company as project manager . These sites offer the chance to work on mettalic structur and water flow prevention . My team works feeling , riguour and organization sense would be relevant for the position . Moreover , as my wife's family is omani , i already know and enjoy the arabic environment . The job you are offering welcome both my personal and professional interests . "
Bonsoir,
I Today I feel ready to diversify my The job you are offering NB : - AUCUNE contraction à l'écrit, en particulier dans ce type de lettre. - Ponctuation : le point et la virgule se collent SANS ESPACE derrière le dernier mot, l'espace se met après. J'ai rectifié partout, mais mémorise-le dorénavant. - Le pronom sujet ne s'écrit qu'avec le " I " MAJUSCULE, j'ai rectifié également. - Les adjectifs et noms de nationalités prennent une MAJUSCULE. - Enfin l'usage d'un bon dictionnaire n'est pas interdit. Bonne chance pour Oman. Modifié 3 fois. Dernière modification le 06/11/11 20:33 par JRB. |
Les ateliers de Papi Jacques | Les cours | |
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Mathématiques, cours niveau terminale.
Histoire, cours niveau terminale. Citations de philosophie. Sciences de la vie et de la terre, des sujets de bac 1999. Chimie, des sujets de bac 2000. |