Description ville - 3éme

Bonjour,
J'ai une présentation orale à faire, c'est une description sur la ville de notre choix. Moi j'ai choisie la ville d'Algarve située au Portugal.
Si vous avez du temps, pouvez-vous me corriger mes fautes ?
Merci d'avance pour la réponse.
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Hello and Welcome !
I'm Méghan, I'm French Student.This is my guide, wich is about Algarve, the capital is Faro. It's a city in the South of Portugal.
During the algarnienne coast, beaches are of white sand and the water is often crystalline.
After the sunset, another filled luminosity the streets of colors and party. Algarve is so exciting at night ! There are a great deal of restaurants and nightclub throughout the avenue and lot of street artists. The animation lasts till morning and people are very welcoming.
The city is so dynamic ! In February, there is a carnival, that of Loulé is the most know. Algarve is more dynamic than the North of Portugal.
If you like taking risks, go to the casino. Games of chance or of lucky ! Also try Casino da Praia da Rocha, Vilamoura or Monte Gordo. In streets more in the center of cities you will find shops of small business sector and memories. In summer, the thematic parties follow one another, Ladie's very renowned Night, in the foam Parties or Sand. On earth either in the sea, take advantage of holidays to maintain the shape and go in simply play golf in front of a view on the ocean, the escurtions by renting car, of the paintball,karting and many other activities !
Algarve is the city most dynamic of Portugal. Penetrate into the beauties of the oceanic worlds, by diving into crystalline waters of Algarve in Pedra da Torre.
See you there ! Cheers !


Excusez-moi , s'il y a de nombreuses fautes .



Modifié 1 fois. Dernière modification le 27/02/13 16:08 par JRB.

Bonjour,

Hello and Welcome!
I'm Meghan, I'm a French student.This is my guide which is about Algarve the capital of which is Faro. It's a city in the south of Portugal.- pas d’accent écrit en anglais.
- a/an obligatoire devant un nom concret attribut du sujet.
During Along the Algarve coast, beaches are of white sand and the water is often crystalline.
After the sunset another filled luminosity light fills the streets of with colors and parties. Algarve Faro is so exciting at night! There are a great deal of restaurants and nightclubs throughout the avenues and lots of street artists. The animation lasts There’s liveliness throughout the night/Liveliness goes on/ till morning and people are very welcoming.Il faut éviter le calque d'expressions françaises.
The city is so dynamic! In February there is a carnival that the one of Loulé is the most known famous. Algarve is more dynamic than the north of Portugal.
If you like taking risks, go to the casino. Games of chance or of lucky! Où est la différence ? Also try Casino da Praia da Rocha, Vilamoura or Monte Gordo. In downtown streets more in the center of cities you will find shops of small business sector and memories souvenirs shops. Toutes les fois que possible, il faut utiliser un nom composé en anglais, c'est bien pratique. In summer, the thematic parties follow one another, Ladie's very renowned night, in the foam or sand parties. Either on dry land earth either in the or at sea, take advantage of holidays to maintain the keep in good shape and go in simply play golf in front of enjoying a view on the ocean, the escurtions by renting rent a car and go for a drive, of the try paintballing, go karting and many other activities!
Algarve Faro is the city most dynamic city of in Portugal. Penetrate Get into the beauties of the oceanic worlds by diving into crystalline waters of Algarve in Pedra da Torre.
See you there! Cheers!
NB :
1° Tu perds souvent de vue ton sujet à tel point qu’on ne sait plus si tu fais référence à la région Algarve ou à la ville Faro. Relis-toi toujours.
2° L’adjectif épithète se place toujours DEVANT le nom.
3° Sans en être certain, je te soupçonne d'avoir utilisé un traducteur automatique. J'espère pour toi que ce n'est pas le cas.
Efforce-toi d’utiliser le dictionnaire correctement : ne t’arrête pas au premier sens proposé mais vérifie toujours dans la partie anglais-français que le mot choisi correspond bien au sens recherché, à l’acception voulue. C'est essentiel.
Bonne continuation.



Modifié 2 fois. Dernière modification le 27/02/13 17:47 par JRB.